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Melissa Lantsman

76 words · 6 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Carlos Leitão (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, my colleague pointed out that we voted against the Conservative motion earlier today. At the same time, she worries about the deficit but would have us increase it even more with the measures that were included in her party’s motion. I have a very simple question: Will the Conservative Party vote for Bill C-38 or not?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 81 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Aside 18%Claims 21%Reasoning 16%The ask 21%Positioning 24%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Aside · 14 wordsI wish the member had listened to my speech before he asked the question.Aside Claims · 16 wordsOf course we will vote for affordability measures.Vague promise Of course we will vote for tax cuts.Vague promise Reasoning · 12 wordsIt is a small piece of relief for families that need it. The ask · 16 wordsHowever, we want the Liberals to recognize that a whole lot more needs to be done. Positioning · 18 wordsIt was needed well before the member got here and will be needed well after he is gone.Positioning

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