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Jeremy Patzer

194 words · 16 sentences · 20 clauses

Replying to Tako Van Popta (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, I was listening to my colleague from Saskatchewan give a speech about temporary reduction of the fuel excise tax. Some of the issues that he raised show us that there are fundamental problems to Canada’s economy. What we are hearing from these Liberals time and time again are temporary, short-term, band-aid solutions to what are really fundamental problems. This bill would reduce the fuel tax by 10¢. My colleague just talked about diesel prices going up 15% or more in a very short period of time. I know we are in the same party and he is probably going to think the same way I do. Is he not getting a little tired of the Liberals talking about temporary, band-aid solutions when there are fundamental problems that need to be addressed?”
Statement grade
D+
54 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 27%Claims 63%Procedure 3%Reasoning 7%

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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 24 wordsmy colleague is absolutely right.Partly on point Every single time that we get up in this House, it seems that we are addressing another Liberal failure.Positioning Claims · 29 wordsWe passed Bill C-5 quickly because the government wanted us to help it pass quickly.1 That was a bill to help the government get around previous bad Liberal laws.Off point Procedure · 5 wordsHowever, that was not enough.Procedure Claims · 50 wordsThe Liberals need Bill C-39 now.2 Bill C-5 did not do enough, so they created Bill C-39. Now, this House is actually dealing with Bill C-39 as well to deal with other systemic Liberal failures.3Off point Bill C-38 would provide temporary relief for Canadians. It would be a short-term, welcome measure, Reasoning · 14 wordsbut there is more structural, substantive relief that the government could provide to Canadians. Claims · 18 wordsThe Liberals have increased government revenue, from 2020 to now, from about $380 billion to over $500 billion.4 Positioning · 17 wordsAsk any Canadian what they have gotten for that massive increase in government revenue from these guys: PositioningClaims · 26 wordsnothing. They have gotten higher prices. Everything is more expensive in Canada since 2020, thanks to these guys. The Liberals are hauling in way more money, Positioning · 11 wordsand yet they are delivering nothing for Canadians.Partly on point It is shameful.PositioningOff point

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