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Dalwinder Gill

72 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Madam Speaker, I made reference to two programs. One is the dental program, which supports many seniors the member opposite represents. I mentioned the school food program, which has a direct impact on many of the children the member represents. His response was that it was wasteful spending. Does the member not recognize that there are children and seniors in his constituency who use those two programs? Is he sure that it is wasteful spending? Would he not reverse his position and support those two programs?”
Statement grade
C–
56 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Reasoning 21%Promise 24%Claims 24%The ask 32%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Reasoning · 15 wordsseniors, who have worked hard their entire lives, should be able to afford basic necessities. Promise · 17 wordsTheir benefits should be indexed to inflation so they keep pace with the real cost of living.Off point Claims · 17 wordsHowever, years of Liberal taxes and rising costs have eroded seniors’ purchasing power and stressed their savings. The ask · 23 wordsThe government needs to cut the deficit and lower taxes to help bring down everyday costs so that seniors can live with dignity.Partly on point

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