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Shuvaloy Majumdar

1263 words · 74 sentences · 97 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 89 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 2%Claims 51%Reasoning 17%Thanks 1%Anecdote 3%Positioning 10%Procedure 2%The ask 3%The question 1%Promise 8%Aside 2%

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Madam Speaker, Greeting · 17 wordsI would like to take a quick minute to note that Canada mourns four of its soldiers.Greeting Claims · 48 wordsOn Saturday, fire overtook a training exercise at CFB Wainwright, 1as we all know.Unearned certainty Thirty-nine soldiers were injured, some critically, 2and four soldiers were killed: 3Sergeant Morgan Wong, Private Shaun Farrell, Private Aidan Goulding and Private Hayden Lykkemark.4 At CFB Wainwright, Canadian soldiers train to defend our country. Reasoning · 48 wordsThey serve alongside allies and uphold the values that bind Canadians together: courage, duty, sacrifice and service. Their loss belongs to the whole nation. To their families, their comrades, the injured and those who rushed to help, Canada owes them our gratitude, our prayers and our lasting support.Off point Thanks · 17 wordsOn behalf of the people of Calgary Heritage, we will remember these soldiers for how they lived: ThanksReasoning · 22 wordsin service to their country, in loyalty to each other and with the quiet courage of those who accept responsibility for others.Off point Anecdote · 14 wordsIn Calgary Heritage, the work trucks leave the yards in the southwest before dawn.Anecdote Claims · 22 wordsThey haul materials to job sites across the city, and then turn south past the city city limits where the farms begin. Anecdote · 22 wordsThose same diesel engines pull the tractors that put the seeds in the ground and the combines that bring the crops home.Anecdote Reasoning · 27 wordsWhen the price at the pump moves, the arithmetic hits the operator first, then the grocer and then the family filling a cart on a Saturday afternoon. Claims · 49 wordsLast month, diesel reached a record $2.75 a litre.5 Even after the spike eased, it was still averaging roughly $2.64.6 That is about 70% higher than a year earlier and nearly 60% higher than the weeks before the war in Iran began interrupting shipments out of the Persian Gulf.78 Reasoning · 7 wordsGlobal events explain why prices rose everywhere. Claims · 23 wordsThey do not explain why Canadians are paying roughly 24¢ a litre more than Americans and about 31¢ more than the world average.910 Reasoning · 8 wordsThe difference is not geology; it is policy. Claims · 79 wordsStatistics Canada reports that gasoline prices have risen 27.8% over the past year, energy costs 19% and transportation 8.4%.11 Diesel is a cost of living issue, because it is a cost of making and moving nearly everything. Every increase reaches the family filling a grocery cart. Bill C-38 would extend the temporary suspension of the federal excise tax on diesel until the end of January.12 Conservatives will support it.13 Every dollar that stays in a working family’s pocket matters. Positioning · 6 wordsWe fought for the first cut.Positioning Claims · 5 wordsWe fought for the extension. Positioning · 3 wordsThe Liberals followed.Positioning Reasoning · 30 wordsThe bill would still place an expiry date on relief: Half the tax returns in February and the full rate returns on April 1.14 Also, the GST continues to apply, Claims · 23 wordsand the clean fuel regulations continue to add costs that the government’s own officials estimate at six to seven cents a litre today.15 Reasoning · 11 wordsThe Parliamentary Budget Officer projects it could reach 16¢ by 2030.16 Claims · 81 wordsThe industrial carbon tax also continues to raise the cost of production. Taken together, these measures leave Canadians paying a premium that global markets alone cannot justify. A round-trip semi-haul between Montreal and Toronto that cost about $850 on New Year’s Day now costs roughly $1,400.17 Rail fuel surcharges for October stand as high as 73% above early August levels.18 Some large farms are spending as much as $5,000 a day on diesel.19 Independent grocers operate on margins of about 2%.20 Reasoning · 14 wordsThose costs do not stay on the loading dock. They appear on the shelf. Claims · 43 wordsThe leader of the opposition put the same facts before the House on September 23 and again the following day.21 He described a full-scale diesel crisis. He noted that with the fourth-largest oil supply on earth, we do not enjoy the lowest prices. Procedure · 5 wordsHe identified three persistent causes: ProcedureClaims · 24 wordsa weaker dollar, insufficient refining and transport capacity because governments have refused to get out of the way, and taxes that continue to apply. The ask · 39 wordsHe called for an emergency fuel relief plan that would remove all federal taxes on diesel until at least Canada Day, permanently eliminate production taxes and set a national goal of producing one million barrels of diesel a day.22 Procedure · 17 wordsThose are the measures on this side of the House that were advanced in successive opposition motions.Procedure Claims · 28 wordsEach time, the government and its partners have voted them down.23 Just last week, the International Energy Agency warned that global diesel shortages could persist well into 2027.24 The question · 14 wordsWhy is the Liberal government scheduling higher fuel taxes while the crisis remains unresolved? Reasoning · 11 wordsConservatives support Bill C-38 because partial relief is better than none. Promise · 49 wordsWe will continue to press for the full plan: removing the remaining federal taxes on diesel until at least Canada Day; scrapping the clean fuel regulations and the industrial carbon tax; and clearing the path for the pipelines, refineries and storage that would let Canadian diesel reach Canadian markets. Procedure · 4 wordsThe objective is simple: ProcedurePromise · 29 wordseliminate the premium Canadians now pay; raise domestic production; and ensure that the fuel that moves our food, our freight and our families is made here and priced here. Positioning · 25 wordsA decade of Liberal carbon taxes and expanding bureaucracy have eroded the gains of Conservative GST cuts and smaller government from over a decade ago.Positioning Claims · 6 wordsCanada has the fourth-largest oil reserves, 25Positioning · 13 wordsand we should be among the best-prepared nations to withstand an energy shock.Positioning Claims · 100 wordsInstead, our 16 refineries operated at roughly 90% of capacity last year.26 Ontario and Quebec refineries import more than 99% of their crude from the United States, 27while 93% of the crude we export moves south.28 There is still no pipeline connecting western Canada to eastern Canada.29 Energy east, proposed in 2013 and withdrawn in 2017, would have closed that gap.30 It was stopped not by markets but by a deliberate policy of obstruction that treated major energy infrastructure as something to be delayed or defeated.Hidden agency The last new refinery, Sturgeon in Alberta, took years and more than $10 billion.31 Reasoning · 19 wordsNew capacity requires permits, pipelines, storage and a regulatory environment that treats builders as partners instead of as adversaries. Positioning · 13 wordsHow did a country so abundantly endowed allow itself to become so vulnerable?Positioning Claims · 43 wordsRussia’s invasion has cut diesel exports and weaponized energy.34 Iran has turned Hormuz into an instrument of coercion while funding proxies across the Middle East. Conflict threatens the Red Sea, Bab el-Mandeb and the Suez Canal. Venezuela’s collapse has removed another major supplier.35 Positioning · 29 wordsIn a world of energy chaos, Canada could be instrumental in achieving energy security, security for our people and security for the world. Imagine if over the last decade, PositioningPromise · 17 wordsand especially from a year and a half ago, Liberals had made energy security a national undertaking: Claims · 19 wordsprepermitted projects, partnerships with first nations, approved pipelines to new markets with shovels in the ground today, more refining, Promise · 10 wordsand transport and storage ready for this age of disruption. Aside · 19 wordsImagine Canadian energy reaching our provinces and allies at scale because we had built the means to move it.Aside Positioning · 26 wordsInstead, the Prime Minister declares that Canada will become an energy superpower while preserving the net-zero orthodoxy and antidevelopment machinery that has held Canadian production back.Positioning Claims · 23 wordsThe United States holds a strategic petroleum reserve.33 After major withdrawals, it has fallen to approximately less than 20% of its accessible capacity.32 Positioning · 13 wordsToday the United States is searching for diesel in all the wrong places.Positioning Reasoning · 12 wordsCanada could have stabilized supply had we built capacity before the emergency. Claims · 23 wordsThat is why Conservatives have proposed a strategic reserve of refined fuels and emergency prepermitting for refineries, for our growth as a country. Greeting · 14 wordsI appreciate the opportunity to address the House today and conclude my remarks here.Greeting

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