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Tako Van Popta

96 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to John-Paul Danko (Liberal). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Madam Speaker, I appreciate the member opposite’s knowledge of the Canadian oil industry. I think he made a couple of fairly poignant good points. Right now, we are seeing record high production of oil and gas in Alberta. I think his main point about diversifying the market and not selling to the United States at a discount and working to sell to the global markets is right on. There is the Trans Mountain pipeline and the expansion that is planned to increase capacity there. Hopefully he will acknowledge that it is in the right direction. There is also the major expansion of liquefied natural gas exports that are going to the west coast to then further diversify that Canadian energy market. I would like his comment on that, please.”
Statement grade
F
38 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 14%Promise 17%Claims 50%Thanks 20%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Positioning · 6 wordsmy colleague probably anticipates the answer.Positioning Promise · 16 wordsOf course we would invest in energy infrastructure.Vague promise Absolutely we would invest in diversifying the market.Vague promise Positioning · 7 wordsLiquefied natural gas is an excellent idea.Positioning Claims · 48 wordsI cannot help but reflect on what former prime minister Trudeau said when the German chancellor came to him and said they wanted to buy liquefied natural gas, and he said there was no business case to be made for liquefied natural gas.1 Today we are building it.Off point Thanks · 19 wordsI thank the Liberals for finally getting on board and understanding that energy infrastructure is important for our economy.Thanks

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