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Jonathan Rowe

177 words · 11 sentences · 16 clauses

Replying to Garnett Genuis (Conservative). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Mr. Speaker, this morning, we tried to move a motion and have a debate in the House on the ongoing youth unemployment crisis. Youth unemployment is at 13%. We actually have the lowest workforce participation in this country in 29 years. As a share of the population, we have the lowest number of people in the workforce. These are concerning numbers that affect people in my region and that I know affect people in Newfoundland and Labrador as well. While we were trying to have that debate, during the first speaking slot the Liberals had, they moved to shut down and end that discussion about what had been an all-party report of the human resources committee, with some really positive constructive proposals on how we could move forward. I wonder if the member could share what he is hearing in terms of the challenge of unemployment and youth unemployment within his riding and in his region and what he thinks motivated the Liberals to shut down a positive debate on some common-sense solutions that came out of the human resources committee.”
Statement grade
C
60 / 100, held down by Signal
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Claims 30%Anecdote 51%Procedure 5%Positioning 8%Promise 5%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 6 wordsyouth unemployment is skyrocketing right now. Anecdote · 47 wordsWhen I was in high school, not very long ago, if someone wanted a job, they went down to McDonald’s with their resume and were given a job on the spot. As long as someone showed up for work and did a good job, they could work.Anecdote Claims · 29 wordsKids are coming up to me, almost in tears, saying that they applied to 130 places and put out hundreds of resumes, but they cannot get a job anywhere.Off point Procedure · 9 wordsThis is a problem. This is a huge problem.Procedure Anecdote · 44 wordsI worked in a gold mine. People would go to college to be a heavy equipment operator, and the first job they would get was in a small gold mine. They would get experience, and they would then go out to launch their career.AnecdotePartly on point Claims · 18 wordsThe issue was that this gold mine closed down at the time because fuel prices went too high. Positioning · 15 wordsThis fuel crisis is killing our economy and taking jobs away from our young people, PositioningPromise · 9 wordsand we need to do something about it, permanently.Vague promise

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