“Mr. Speaker, Canadians are hungry, literally. They are hungry, yet putting food on the table is beyond their ability and their means. Food Banks Canada released a report showing that food bank visits have increased by 9% since this Prime Minister took office. There are 2.35 million visits in a single month. The Prime Minister promised that he would be judged by the price at the grocery store, so what is the verdict according to all the people lining up?”
Statement grade
F
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 64. The grade is held to 39, 30 above Relevance.
39 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 9%Reasoning 18%Positioning 39%Claims 34%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 9 wordsI want to thank my colleague for his question.ThanksReasoning · 18 wordsHe is right: The government and all parliamentarians need to make fighting this country’s affordability crisis a priority.Partly on pointPositioning · 29 wordsAt every opportunity, however, members of his party have voted against highly concrete measures that are helping the neediest Quebeckers and Canadians cope with the rising cost of living.PositioningClaims · 34 wordsFor example, his party’s 10 Quebec members voted against 300,000 Quebeckers who now have access to the Canadian dental care plan.12These 10 Quebec members voted against $900 million in Canada child benefit payments.34Positioning · 10 wordsIt is high time that they backed up their words—PositioningOff point