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Joël Lightbound

152 words · 9 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Andréanne Larouche (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, yesterday in committee, the unions were unanimous: Bill C‑39 is an attack on workers. According to the machinists’ representative, the employer will always put the lowest offer on the table knowing that the government will intervene. The Canadian Labour Congress representative said that she did not believe for a minute that the bill will improve the collective bargaining process and that it will embolden employers to hold out and not get a deal. How can the Liberals be even more anti-union than the Conservatives?”
Statement grade
C+
68 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Thanks 12%Positioning 12%Reasoning 24%Claims 51%Aside 1%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 18 wordsI have a great deal of respect for my opposition colleague, and I thank her for her question.Thanks Positioning · 8 wordsHowever, that is not our vision at all.Positioning Reasoning · 37 wordsWhat we are trying to do is encourage the parties to reach an agreement, Vague promisebecause we believe that the best agreement is always the one that is reached at the bargaining table. That is our aim here.Vague promise Claims · 60 wordsThe objective of Bill C‑39 is to get major projects built across the country.1 I want to point out that the last time we were in the House, the member’s leader mocked the project in Churchill Falls, saying that our major project was in Newfoundland and Labrador, 2as though the Churchill Falls project would have no impact whatsoever on Quebec. Positioning · 11 wordsThat is a very narrow-minded view that I find quite baffling.Positioning Claims · 17 wordsTo quote the CEO of Hydro-Québec, Churchill Falls is the largest renewable energy project in North America.3Off point Aside · 1 wordsProsperity—Aside

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