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Peter Fragiskatos

56 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Pierre Poilievre (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister made big promises that he was going to buy Canadian. However, in his first year in office, he increased U.S. purchases by $7.8 billion. This week, we learned that he cast aside the Commissionaires, the single largest employer of veterans in Canada, in favour of an American company, to save just 1%. That company is linked to ICE and Donald Trump. Why is the Prime Minister casting our veterans aside to favour an American company?”
Statement grade
D+
52 / 100, held down by Signal
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Procedure 43%Positioning 34%Claims 23%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 8 wordsthe member raises the question of veterans, ultimately.Procedure Positioning · 19 wordsI would remind him of the Conservative record on veterans and the endless cuts we saw under Conservative leadership.PositioningOff point Procedure · 8 wordsWe can leave that aside for a moment.Procedure Claims · 13 wordsThe decision, as articulated yesterday, was taken through a transparent and open process.Hidden agency Procedure · 8 wordsI leave that to the member to consider.Procedure

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