“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister made big promises that he was going to buy Canadian. However, in his first year in office, he increased U.S. purchases by $7.8 billion. This week, we learned that he cast aside the Commissionaires, the single largest employer of veterans in Canada, in favour of an American company, to save just 1%. That company is linked to ICE and Donald Trump. Why is the Prime Minister casting our veterans aside to favour an American company?”
Statement grade
D+
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 56. The grade is held to 52, 30 above Signal.
52 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 43%Positioning 34%Claims 23%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 8 wordsthe member raises the question of veterans, ultimately.ProcedurePositioning · 19 wordsI would remind him of the Conservative record on veterans and the endless cuts we saw under Conservative leadership.PositioningOff pointProcedure · 8 wordsWe can leave that aside for a moment.ProcedureClaims · 13 wordsThe decision, as articulated yesterday, was taken through a transparent and open process.Hidden agencyProcedure · 8 wordsI leave that to the member to consider.Procedure