“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister made big promises that he was going to buy Canadian. Then we learned that in his first year in office, he spent $7.8 billion more than the previous year on American companies, with Canadian tax dollars. This week, we learned that he cast aside the Commissionaires, the single largest employer of veterans in Canada, to favour an American security firm linked to Donald Trump and ICE. Why did the Prime Minister, after making his big promise, cast aside our veterans to favour an American firm at Canadians’ expense?”
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Procedure 6%Claims 62%Positioning 32%
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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 4 wordslet me be clear.ProcedureClaims · 39 wordsAs highlighted yesterday by the Secretary of State for the Canada Revenue Agency, the CRA followed a fair and open procurement process for guard services.1It selected a registered Canadian business headquartered in Ontario that employs thousands of Canadians.2Positioning · 20 wordsOur government will always stand with Canadian workers and Canadian businesses as we build the strongest economy in the G7.PositioningVague promise