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Peter Fragiskatos

100 words · 10 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to John Barlow (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister told Canadians he should be judged by their experience at the grocery store. For Becky, her experience has been a nightmare. She said she works hard, but she still cannot afford to put food on the table for her and her son. She is not alone. There have been more than 2.3 million visits to food banks in Canada in one month. The number of Canadian families forced to use a food bank is up 116% since 2019. Will the Prime Minister admit that relying on a food bank is now a reality for many Canadians, or does he truly believe that affordability is the best it has been in a decade?”
Statement grade
B–
74 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 51%Reasoning 20%Positioning 12%Promise 17%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 6 wordsthere certainly is hardship in Canada. Reasoning · 20 wordsWe should not ignore that fact. What we should do is work together and not politicize the hardship of Canadians. Positioning · 12 wordsThe member knows that. All members know that, or should know that.Positioning Claims · 45 wordsWe have six million Canadians receiving the Canada child benefit.1 We have 6.5 million Canadians receiving dental support.2 We have 400,000 children receiving the support of the school food program.3 We have 900,000 children and their families receiving the support of the child care program.4 Promise · 17 wordsWe will continue in that vein on the basis that we represent our constituents and always have.Partly on pointVague promise

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