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Lena Metlege Diab

73 words · 10 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Michelle Rempel Garner (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, as we sat here, some sombre news just broke. BioWare, an Edmonton software firm, which produced beloved video games like Mass Effect and created jobs for Edmontonians, is being shuttered. The immigration minister just scrapped the last safeguard that forces IT corporations to try to hire Canadians before offering the job to somebody from outside the country. What does she have to say to those people from BioWare who just lost their jobs and who might not get a look because of her policy decision?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 74 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 8%Claims 62%Positioning 30%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 6 wordslet me set the record straight.Procedure Claims · 12 wordsThe member has been in that seat for 10 or 11 years, 1Positioning · 9 wordsand she knows better.Positioning She is continually misleading Canadians.Off pointInsult Claims · 20 wordsThis is a measure for permanent residents who are already here.2 This is cutting red tape and making it simpler. Positioning · 13 wordsIt is better. It is good for businesses. It is good for employers.Positioning Claims · 13 wordsSkilled individuals will be using it.Partly on point This is not for temporary foreign workers.3

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