“Mr. Speaker, recently I spoke with Tina from my community, whose nine-year-old son was murdered by Douglas Lambier. In the 21 years since her son’s murder, her life has never been the same. While his parole was recently denied by the government, Mr. Lambier has been allowed to have a 60-day unescorted absence to attend a program. Why is the Liberal government allowing a murderer who the Parole Board deems unfit to rejoin society to have a 60-day unescorted absence?”
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Thanks 18%Claims 74%Procedure 9%
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 12 wordslet me express my condolences to Tina, her family and her community.ThanksClaims · 7 wordsWhat the individual has done is unspeakable, Partly on pointProcedure · 6 wordsbut let me be very clear.ProcedureClaims · 43 wordsThe decision of the Parole Board is independent.It makes decisions based on the facts in front of it.That is the way that the Conservative Party, when it was in government, implemented the Parole Act, 1and we continue to do the same.2Vague promise