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Rachael Thomas

178 words · 10 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Gabriel Ste-Marie (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, I would like to begin by congratulating my colleague on her very moving and poignant speech. Indeed, urgent action is needed to protect our young people and improve digital safety. My colleague referred to the measures put in place in Australia that did not produce the desired results. Can she tell us what lessons we can learn from the measures introduced in Australia? What role should the federal government play in ensuring safety, and what role should the provinces play?”
Statement grade
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Average 96 / 100
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Claims 59%Reasoning 29%Procedure 4%Promise 8%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 53 wordsin Australia, there was legislation put in place that essentially banned anyone under the age of 16 from setting up or maintaining a social media account.1 Within their legislation, they outlined 10 specific social platforms.2 What ended up happening is that many young people just went to other platforms that were not regulated. Reasoning · 23 wordsOf course, there is an argument to be said that this actually drives young people into the dark web, which is potentially dangerous. Procedure · 8 wordsThere is another thing that happened in Australia.Procedure Claims · 52 wordsWhen the legislation was independently reviewed in terms of its effect or its impact, it was found that, three months after it was implemented, only 30% of youth had complied.3 In other words, 70% of youth accounts still existed and 70% of young people were still online within these social media platforms.4 Reasoning · 17 wordsThere are questions there with regard to the efficacy of the legislation and whether it can work. Promise · 14 wordsI think that is one of the things we will be bringing to committee. Reasoning · 11 wordsWhat changes would be needed for the legislation to be successful?Partly on point

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