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Sameer Zuberi

166 words · 10 sentences · 13 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I like to think that every member of the House can understand and appreciate the impact that the Internet has on all people. This legislation is, I would suggest, somewhat historic in the sense that we are addressing a problem that everyone is concerned about. How we pass this legislation through would provide the assurances that it would not be taking away the rights of parents. It would complement them in many ways and demonstrate that the government very much wants to play a role in protecting people’s interests by looking at platforms and algorithms. That is what we should be doing as government. I am wondering if the member could provide his thoughts on why it is important that the national government play a leadership role in bringing forward legislation of this nature.”
Statement grade
B–
73 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Reasoning 27%Claims 37%Positioning 23%The question 6%The ask 7%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 9 wordsthe member for Winnipeg North was referring to parents, Claims · 7 wordsand many of us here are parents. Positioning · 16 wordsWe care about raising our children, and we make sure that they are taken care of.Positioning Reasoning · 13 wordsWe do not put our children into spaces where there is potential harm. Positioning · 13 wordsHowever, we know, unfortunately, that online spaces can sometimes be the Wild West, PositioningUnearned certaintyClaims · 17 wordsand something that this bill is addressing is to put guardrails on the most egregious of behaviours.1 Positioning · 9 wordsI would say, frankly, that this is long overdue.Positioning Claims · 38 wordsThe fact we are actually legislating on this right now, today, after the Internet and things have been in existence for what is now running to decades, is something that we need to reflect on as a chamber.2 The question · 10 wordsHow is it possible we are so late in this? Reasoning · 22 wordsThis is something we should have addressed a long time ago. Therefore, I am really happy that we are doing this now. The ask · 12 wordsWe need to reflect on our tardiness in dealing with this situation.Partly on point

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