Analysis · Speech on a motion · beta

Luc Berthold

811 words · 38 sentences · 49 clauses

Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Greeting 1%Positioning 11%Claims 63%The question 1%Reasoning 4%Aside 2%Procedure 9%The ask 8%

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Madam Speaker, Greeting · 12 wordsI will be sharing my time with my hon. colleague from Louis-Saint-Laurent—Akiawenhrahk.Greeting Positioning · 56 wordsWe are debating a motion today that perfectly illustrates how this Liberal government operates. In fact, I should say how it fails to operate, because since this new version of the old Liberal government was elected, we have heard a great deal of promises but seen very few results. We have heard grand promises, significant promises.Positioning Claims · 56 wordsThe first was the Prime Minister’s promise that he would be the right person to resolve the tariff dispute with our neighbour to the south, Donald Trump, 1and that, because he is a prominent banker and has a wealth of experience, he would be able to find a solution that would ensure Canadians pay fewer tariffs. The question · 8 wordsEighteen months later, have we seen any improvement? Claims · 89 wordsWhen I speak to businesses in my riding, unfortunately they tell me quite the opposite. Every time that this government takes a step forward, it seems that the U.S. government and Donald Trump use it as an opportunity to raise tariffs. The first misleading claim by this government and this Prime Minister pointed to his long list of credentials and past experience to say that he was the right person for the job. Unfortunately, we have seen that he has been unable to reach an agreement with the Americans, 2Reasoning · 7 wordsand Canadians are left paying the price. Claims · 54 wordsThe second major promise he made was that he would be judged by the prices at the grocery store. Of all the people I have spoken with, not one has told me that groceries have become less expensive over the past 18 months under this new Prime Minister from the same old Liberal government. Aside · 8 wordsI think that everyone understands what I mean.Aside Positioning · 10 wordsOnce again, we have a government that talks a lot.Positioning Claims · 15 wordsOur leader likes to say that this Prime Minister is all talk and no action. Positioning · 25 wordsPersonally, I would say that he is all talk, a bad negotiator and short on results, because nothing is getting done. That is the reality.PositioningOff pointUnearned certainty Procedure · 20 wordsI will ask my Bloc Québécois colleagues for their indulgence, as I will return to the motion in a moment, ProcedureClaims · 111 wordsbecause I want to say that I was asked this week about the fact that I had written to a minister of this Liberal government.3 It is as though there were something wrong with a member of Parliament writing to a minister because their department is not functioning properly to offer potential solutions. Unfortunately, the minister chose to use that letter to play partisan politics in the House. The Minister of Jobs and Families used a letter that I had sent her on behalf of three businesses in my riding to score political points, claiming that we say one thing and do another, when nothing could be further from the truth.4Off point Procedure · 28 wordsSince I was unable to table this letter, I would like to read three short paragraphs expressing what I wanted to tell the minister. Here is an excerpt: ProcedureClaims · 51 wordsThe current delays at ESDC [Employment and Social Development Canada] are hard to fathom for businesses that rely on the processing times published by the department.5 In most cases brought to our attention, these processing times are not being met. Worse still, they sometimes end up twice as long as expected.Off point Procedure · 12 wordsA little further on, I wrote the following about one company’s experience: ProcedureClaims · 42 wordsAn LMIA [labour market impact assessment] for three workers was submitted last March 25.6 More than 90 days after it was filed, the business was still awaiting a reply, 7and two of the three workers involved were no longer able to work.8Off point Procedure · 16 wordsHere is a passage concerning another business that illustrates a different issue deserving the minister’s attention: ProcedureClaims · 42 wordsThe company waited more than 150 days for a response to an LMIA.9 After more than five months, the file still had not been processed and, according to information sent to my office, had not even been taken in charge by ESDC.10 Reasoning · 8 wordsThat is what I was telling the minister. Claims · 53 wordsI would not have made the letter public. I would not have brought it up here because I thought we could still sort things out with the Liberal ministers. However, it seems that we can no longer trust exchanges between a member who represents a riding and the ministers of this Liberal government. The ask · 44 wordsI think that is wrong and that there should seriously be a cabinet shuffle somewhere so that the people who are in those seats realize that they have a responsibility to all Canadians, not just Canadians in their ridings but Canadians in all ridings. Reasoning · 15 wordsThat is what democracy is all about. They are government ministers who must represent everyone. Aside · 9 wordsI really wanted to get that on the record.Aside The ask · 20 wordsI would also like to seek the unanimous consent of the House to table the letter if my colleagues agree.Off point

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