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Luc Berthold

125 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Connie Cody (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, in this current day of an affordability crisis, which the Liberal government voted we are actually not in, I am hearing from members of my community about affordability and accountability with respect to the government. It seems that the government is measuring its success by the amount of money it spends. What are my colleague’s thoughts on that?”
Statement grade
A
Average 94 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 14%Claims 60%Procedure 3%The ask 22%

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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 18 wordsif there is one thing the Liberal government has plenty of, it is money it does not have.Positioning Claims · 31 wordsThe Liberals are putting a lot of measures in place, but not a one of them can be paid with money that exists. It is money the government has to borrow. Procedure · 4 wordsWhat does that mean?Procedure Claims · 44 wordsIt means that by 2030, it will cost Canadians $83 billion a year in interest on the debt.1 That is more than we pay for the health transfer, even though we have major problems across the country, particularly when it comes to mental health.2 The ask · 28 wordsI therefore invite the Liberals to be more prudent and fiscally responsible with Canadians’ money, and I invite them to solve the real problems instead of creating more.

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