“Madam Speaker, I want to congratulate all the newly elected members of the Quebec National Assembly, including former members of the House of Commons, especially the Conservative members. It has been decades. I also thank the member for his comments. Can he give more examples of times when the Liberals failed to keep their promises? If so, what impact have these empty promises had on Quebec?”
Statement grade
B+
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 86. The grade is held to 82, 30 above Signal.
82 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 43%Claims 46%Reasoning 11%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Madam Speaker, Positioning · 30 wordsindeed, the Prime Minister was elected on the basis of a lot of promises he made, talking elbows up yet going thumbs up instead while making no progress with Trump.PositioningClaims · 40 wordsWorse still, he said he would be judged by the price of food, 4but since he came to power, the number of people using food banks has grown by more than 20%.3Last month, 2.3 million people visited food banks.1Reasoning · 12 wordsThe most basic of all our needs is the need to eat.Claims · 10 wordsHowever, 2.35 million people have to turn to food banks.2Positioning · 16 wordsThis is not the Canada we dreamed of.This is not the Canada that Canadians deserve.PositioningPartly on point