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Luc Thériault

182 words · 12 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Mario Simard (Bloc Québécois). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the motion.
“Mr. Speaker, in his excellent speech, my colleague demonstrated the government’s cowardice. Today, it is trying to pass off taking $600 million directly out of the pockets of Quebeckers and Canadians as a solution, when the fact is that the web giants make $4 billion a year. I would like my colleague to talk to us about how levies might be a better solution than what the government is currently proposing.”
Statement grade
A
Average 92 / 100
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Procedure 4%Claims 79%Positioning 17%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 4 wordsit is the context.Procedure Claims · 117 wordsWe are forgoing $4 billion by not standing up to the Americans and the web giants that come here and make money at our expense.3 The Liberals say this will strengthen their position in trade talks.5 They are prepared to make concessions.Vague promise The government talks about how much it cares about the cultural sector and says that is why it is offering $600 million in lieu of the levies.2 The thing is, that $600 million is taxpayers’ money. On top of that, the government would have people believe that affordability is the reason it is not moving forward with the CRTC’s decision, even though the CRTC has the authority to impose these levies on billionaire web giants.1 Procedure · 4 wordsThat is the problem.Procedure Positioning · 31 wordsThe government is not standing its ground. It is not being “elbows up”. Instead, it is yielding to the bully and trying to sugarcoat a bad decision with this $600 million.Positioning Claims · 26 wordsBy the way, our motion is about getting that $600 million out the door right away because the cultural industry has been waiting for 16 months.4

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