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James Bezan

174 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 88 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 46%Procedure 6%Reasoning 5%The ask 33%Positioning 10%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 18 wordsin Manitoba, law-abiding hunters are being denied access to public Crown lands by an illegal blockade near Bloodvein.6Hidden agency Procedure · 11 wordsLet us be clear that provincial crown lands are public lands.1Procedure Reasoning · 8 wordsThey are meant to be enjoyed by everyone. Claims · 62 wordsThe wildlife on those lands is managed by a provincial department.2 The road where the illegal checkpoint is set up is a provincial road, 3and the RCMP in Manitoba operate under a provincial contract.4 Instead of enforcing the law, according to media reports, a Manitoba NDP minister may have broken the law and tried to bribe a chief of a first nation.5 The ask · 57 wordsThe federal Minister of Public Safety must tell Manitobans whether these troubling allegations against one of Premier Kinew’s ministers are being investigated. Because the provincial NDP government has failed to resolve this situation, I am calling on the Minister of Northern Affairs, who is also the MP for this area, to intervene and have the roadblock removed. Positioning · 18 wordsProtecting hunting rights and respecting indigenous rights should not come at the expense of the rule of law.Positioning

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