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Frank Caputo

145 words · 12 sentences · 14 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 39 wordsI pay tribute to Dieter Dudy of Kamloops, who unexpectedly passed away in September.1 Dieter was an extraordinary person who will be fondly remembered and deeply missed. His legacy centres around his dedication to family, community and public service.Thanks Claims · 21 wordsDieter served as a two-term councillor in Kamloops.2 He was known for his work at Thistle Farm, an organic vegetable farm.3 Anecdote · 11 wordsI will miss chatting with him at our local farmers’ markets.Anecdote Claims · 61 wordsHe donated thousands of pounds of fresh produce to the Kamloops Food Bank to help the hungry.4 Dieter gave time to Tourism Kamloops, serving on its board; 5to the Rotary; and to Community Futures. Dieter was predeceased by his wife Debbie.6 Mourning his loss are his partner Lynn Tendler, son Ryan Dudy, daughter Kaitlin Methot and her daughters, Sophia and Alyse. Thanks · 13 wordsI offer the family my deepest condolences. May perpetual light shine upon Dieter.Thanks

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