Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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Thanks 36%Claims 57%Anecdote 8%
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 39 wordsI pay tribute to Dieter Dudy of Kamloops, who unexpectedly passed away in September.1Dieter was an extraordinary person who will be fondly remembered and deeply missed.His legacy centres around his dedication to family, community and public service.ThanksClaims · 21 wordsDieter served as a two-term councillor in Kamloops.2He was known for his work at Thistle Farm, an organic vegetable farm.3Anecdote · 11 wordsI will miss chatting with him at our local farmers’ markets.AnecdoteClaims · 61 wordsHe donated thousands of pounds of fresh produce to the Kamloops Food Bank to help the hungry.4Dieter gave time to Tourism Kamloops, serving on its board; 5to the Rotary; and to Community Futures.Dieter was predeceased by his wife Debbie.6Mourning his loss are his partner Lynn Tendler, son Ryan Dudy, daughter Kaitlin Methot and her daughters, Sophia and Alyse.Thanks · 13 wordsI offer the family my deepest condolences.May perpetual light shine upon Dieter.Thanks