Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 60 wordsthis month, Sudbury’s Homelessness Network marked its 20th anniversary of providing support services to people experiencing homelessness.4The network is a partnership of five organizations: 3Centre de santé communautaire, the John Howard Society, the Elizabeth Fry Society, the N’Swakamok Friendship Centre and Association des jeunes de la rue.Each partner brings its own expertise, relationships and knowledge of the community.Reasoning · 42 wordsTogether, they have built a coordinated response that is stronger than any one organization can provide on its own.As Denis Constantineau, executive director of the Community Health Centre, said, homelessness describes a person’s housing situation.1It does not define the person.2Thanks · 27 wordsI thank all the partners, outreach workers, case managers, housing workers and support staff for their work, their compassion and their persistence over the past 20 years.Thanks