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Wayne Long

56 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Michael Barrett (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, for days the Liberals have been leaning on this claim that it is an independent procurement process while ignoring their responsibility to have a framework in place that prioritizes the employment of veterans and buying Canadian. That is what they have been talking about, a buy Canadian strategy. Instead, they picked a U.S.-owned company with ties to Donald Trump’s ICE and in the headlines for all the wrong reasons instead of prioritizing employing Canadian veterans. Why did they not hire veterans or buy Canadian?”
Statement grade
C+
Average 69 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 27%Claims 66%Procedure 7%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 15 wordswe have always supported and will always support veterans, including with respect to employment opportunities.PositioningVague promise Claims · 21 wordsThe process the CRA undertook was independent, 1which resulted in the contract going to a Canadian subsidiary with over 10,000 workers.2Partly on point Procedure · 4 wordsLet us talk facts.Procedure Claims · 16 wordsThis contract was about for 60 employees, of whom 33 have been rehired, including 12 veterans.3Partly on point

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