“Mr. Speaker, this was a $12-million security contract with the CRA that was awarded to an American-based company that refers to itself as America’s most patriotic company. It is also a company known for paying lower wages and benefits to its employees. For 100 years, the Commissionaires has employed thousands of veterans, RCMP officers and former members with good wages and benefits. Was supporting Canadian veterans and Canadian workers ever a consideration with this contract or was it always intended for the same corporate networks that keep benefiting from the Prime Minister?”
Statement grade
B
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 78 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 11%Claims 56%Promise 33%
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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 7 wordsas my colleague has already spoken to, ProcedureClaims · 35 wordsand as I spoke to yesterday, this was a contract awarded through the CRA following a fair and open procurement process.1It selected a registered Canadian business headquartered in Ontario, 2which employs thousands of Canadians.3Promise · 21 wordsOur government will always stand with Canadian workers and Canadian businesses, Partly on pointVague promiseand we will build the strongest economy in the G7.Off pointVague promise