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Jill McKnight

51 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Jeff Kibble (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Liberals have again betrayed veterans, stripping the Commissionaires of a $12-million CRA contract only open to Canadian companies. It went to Allied Universal, an American company with just 1% of its workforce in Canada and tied to Donald Trump’s ICE deportations. The Liberals wrap themselves in the flag at election time, and then pay Americans at contract time. Here is the kicker: Allied Universal has been suing the government for $420 million. Will the Prime Minister give the contract back to the Commissionaires?”
Statement grade
C+
Average 67 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 39%Claims 39%Promise 22%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 20 wordsI thank my colleague across the way for his service to Canada and for his advocacy on behalf of veterans.Thanks Claims · 20 wordsAs we have stated, this was a fair and open procurement process. The decision was made by officials at CRA.1 Promise · 11 wordsWe will continue to stand with Canadian workers and Canadian businesses.Partly on pointVague promise

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