“Mr. Speaker, throwing more money at the problem will not produce the steel this company needs at this time. How does this make industry more competitive? Conservatives have a plan to eliminate the industrial carbon tax, to pre-approve LNG projects that create demand for Canadian steel and to restore access to our largest export market. If this Cambridge manufacturer cannot secure the material it needs, it will be forced to shut down. Families will lose their paycheques, and customers and contracts will leave Canada. We have a serious proposal to save Canadian jobs. Will the Prime Minister adopt our plan and give businesses a fighting chance?”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 17 wordswe actually have a serious proposal to save jobs, Vague promiseand we are putting the money behind it.Vague promisePositioning · 14 wordsWhat we are not doing is standing up there and criticizing every single idea— PositioningPartly on pointSome hon. members: Oh, oh!