“Mr. Speaker, throwing more money at the problem will not produce the steel this company needs at this time. How does this make industry more competitive? Conservatives have a plan to eliminate the industrial carbon tax, to pre-approve LNG projects that create demand for Canadian steel and to restore access to our largest export market. If this Cambridge manufacturer cannot secure the material it needs, it will be forced to shut down. Families will lose their paycheques, and customers and contracts will leave Canada. We have a serious proposal to save Canadian jobs. Will the Prime Minister adopt our plan and give businesses a fighting chance?”
Statement grade
C–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 69. The grade is held to 59, 30 above Relevance.
59 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 80%Positioning 20%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 77 wordswhen industry speaks and tells the Government of Canada and the Province of Ontario what kinds of supports they need, we listen.We listen, because we know we can actually pivot these industries and support Canadian workers.Partly on pointVague promiseWhen northern Ontario puts its hand up and says it wants to be part of the solution and wants faster action on the Ring of Fire, we partner with Ontario.1We build those roads.Off pointThat is what we are doing.Positioning · 19 wordsWe are working hard every day for Canadian workers, Vague promiseand that is how we stand together as a country.PositioningPartly on point