Analysis · Speech on a motion · beta

Alexis Deschênes

219 words · 16 sentences · 17 clauses

Statement grade
A
Average 92 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 15%Claims 64%Reasoning 17%The ask 4%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 20 wordslet us talk a little bit about the importance of what we are proposing today, the purpose of our motion.Procedure Claims · 14 wordsIn the Gaspé, we are lucky to have quite a few local media outlets.1 Procedure · 5 wordsWhat do those people do?Procedure Claims · 51 wordsThey connect members of the community. What I mean by that is that they create a space for dialogue where people can have democratic discussions. They give a voice to the voiceless. They let marginalized people, members of civil society and elected officials express themselves. They help foster a collective dialogue. Reasoning · 19 wordsI believe in that. Freedom of expression and dialogue ensure that, in society, discussion leads to identifying promising solutions.Unearned certainty Claims · 44 wordsThis is a traditional media model that we need to support during this revenue crisis. Social media and major platforms are eating into these outlets’ revenue streams because there are too many advertisers paying to advertise on social media.2 We all use social media, Procedure · 8 wordsbut let us think about how it works.Procedure Claims · 32 wordsThe idea behind social media is to create echo chambers, to make society as individualistic as possible so that those who think alike all end up together in their own little corner.Partly on point Reasoning · 18 wordsWe need to support our local media to counterbalance what social media is doing by making society individualistic. The ask · 8 wordsThat is why members should support our motion.

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