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Pat Kelly

487 words · 15 sentences · 22 clauses

Statement grade
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Average 88 / 100
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The ask 13%Claims 50%Positioning 29%Procedure 2%Reasoning 6%

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Madam Speaker, The ask · 36 wordsa few weeks ago, I asked the government if it would adopt the Conservative plan to repeal its antidevelopment laws, remove capital gains taxes on investment gains reinvested in Canada and remove its industrial carbon tax.3 Claims · 32 wordsThe response from the Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister of Immigration, Refugees and Citizenship was quite remarkable. He rose in this place and said, “We used to build things in this country.”4 Positioning · 111 wordsI thought what a telling response that was, what a strange response from a parliamentary secretary speaking for a government that has been in power for 11 years, to concede that under the Liberals’ watch, Canada has indeed become a country where things do not get built. It was quite surprising, and I could not help but say then that the parliamentary secretary is going to be really upset when he finds out who has been in charge for the last 11 years. It is as if the government were having an out-of-body experience, viewing what has transpired in Canada and the transformation that has occurred in Canada during its tenure.Positioning Claims · 119 wordsThe parliamentary secretary must be really upset to find out now that the government for which he is a spokesperson brought in a ministerial order, immediately upon taking office, to cancel the northern gateway pipeline, that the government brought in a bill, Bill C-48, to slam the door shut on a northern pipeline by banning shipping traffic, 12or to prevent shipping traffic coming into either the port of either Kitimat or the port of Prince Rupert. He must have been really disappointed that the government passed Bill C-69 in 2019, 7which, following several years of continual moving of goalposts, made it absolutely impossible for any private sector proponent to propose, gain approval for and build a pipeline in Canada. Positioning · 18 wordsThe parliamentary secretary must have been very disappointed that the government chased TransCanada Pipeline out of the country.Positioning Claims · 76 wordsIt changed its name to TC Energy and focused its energy and investment activity in Mexico and the United States.5 He and the other Liberals must be very disappointed to suddenly learn that their government has presided over a decline in per capita GDP growth during the time they were in office and that they have presided over a now continual collapsing of housing starts, 6which they keep promising are going to increase but do not. Procedure · 4 wordsThis is the record.Procedure Reasoning · 5 wordsIt is the Liberals’ responsibility, Claims · 17 wordsand it is during their tenure that we became a country where we failed to build projects. The ask · 25 wordsI do implore the Liberals to adopt the Conservative plan to actually repeal the laws that prevent projects from getting built, instead of their approach, Reasoning · 23 wordswhich is to grant themselves more power to then politically interfere by declaring which projects the laws of Canada will not apply to. Procedure · 8 wordsI will have to leave it at that, ProcedurePositioning · 13 wordsand we will see what the parliamentary secretary has to say in response.Positioning

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