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Jason Groleau

60 words · 5 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Joël Godin (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, I listened to the speech by my colleague from Beauce, and I found it interesting when he talked about responsibility. He explained how the provincial government is leasing the site to the company in question for $13,500, while that company is billing the Canadian government $20 million. It is absurd. Does my colleague believe this government is acting responsibly? I heard the procurement minister say this week that dental care programs were being offered, while we were bringing up food banks and how much Canadians are struggling to put food on the table. I would like to hear my colleague’s thoughts on whether this Liberal government is acting responsibly.”
Statement grade
C+
66 / 100, held down by Signal
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Positioning 62%Claims 38%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Positioning · 34 wordsI have the utmost respect for my colleague. The words “responsibility” and “accountability” should be heard a lot more here in Parliament.Partly on point As parliamentarians, we are taking action, representing taxpayers and managing public funds.PositioningVague promise Claims · 23 wordsWhile people are struggling to put food on the table, the government is spending $200 million on a 25- by 35-foot concrete slab.1 Positioning · 3 wordsThat is unacceptable.Positioning

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