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Jason Groleau

72 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Patrick Bonin (Bloc Québécois). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Madam Speaker, I thank my colleague and his Conservative colleagues for highlighting this preposterous $200-million payment for a concrete slab. It does indeed raise questions, and I think it is reasonable to demand answers from the government. These are public funds, after all, and it is important not to waste them. The fact remains that Canada is currently the only G7 country with no satellite launch capabilities, even though satellites are practically indispensable to daily life, whether for travel or communications. Does that fact concern my colleague?”
Statement grade
C–
56 / 100, held down by Signal
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Thanks 19%Anecdote 15%Procedure 8%Claims 17%Positioning 29%Reasoning 11%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Thanks · 14 wordsI thank my hon. colleague, who is a great hockey player by the way.Thanks Anecdote · 11 wordsI have had to face off with him a few times.AnecdoteOff point Procedure · 5 wordsThat is a good question.Procedure Claims · 12 wordsYes, the purpose is national security, 1and yes, we need launch capabilities. Procedure · 1 wordsHowever, ProcedurePositioning · 21 wordsas I have been saying all day, people are struggling to eat and yet money is being spent with reckless abandon.Positioning Reasoning · 8 wordsIt is important to manage Canadians’ money responsibly.Off point

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