Replying to Greg McLean (Conservative). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Madam Speaker, I would like my colleague to address what happened yesterday in relation to Maritime Launch Services. The RCMP raided an operation in Quebec, Lion, that has shown exactly the government’s template for how it actually funnels government money, taxpayer money, to individuals it favours. How this relates to Maritime Launch Services is that it has taken two years for Lion to be investigated by the RCMP. Maritime Launch Services is doing exactly the same thing. The government, in arrears, gave $20 million of rent to Maritime Launch Services, before it even occupied it, for a $300,000 lease that it actually had. It was $20 million, for nothing at all, to give to the government’s friends. The minute it did that, the president of Maritime Launch Services took a whole bunch of his shares and sold them, as they were pumped up to 60¢ a share, putting almost $2 million in his pocket. The government is continually using mechanisms through which it is funnelling Canadian dollars, almost illegally, as the RCMP showed yesterday, to its friends in their chosen fields. Can the member tell us that we will not see the same repeat of a raid from the RCMP on this operation?”
Statement grade
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The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 74 / 100
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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 9 wordsthose are extraordinary accusations and allegations in the House.PositioningPromise · 19 wordsI am certain, with the RCMP investigation, that we will investigate and get to the bottom of it, clearly.1Off pointVague promiseUnearned certaintyProcedure · 37 wordsI want to come back to the whole conversation, though, about how the land is supposedly just a little slab, how it was worth a tiny amount and how we are now paying this much for it.ProcedureReasoning · 46 wordsAnyone who knows a thing about zoning knows that every housing development and every factory starts in a field, a slab.It is about the geography.It is about the potential.The minute the zoning changes, the minute the economic opportunity expands, so does the cost.Claims · 18 wordsThere are not a million places we can launch satellites from in Canada.This is one of them.