Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 10%Positioning 16%Reasoning 45%Claims 29%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Madam Speaker, Thanks · 15 wordsI would like to give a special thanks to Dr. Kent Stobart from CancerCare Manitoba.ThanksPositioning · 24 wordsHe and his staff members truly care about what is happening in Canada, and particularly in Manitoba, with respect to how we treat cancer.PositioningReasoning · 26 wordsIt is so critically important that as a nation, we invest in research for cancer.It could help save lives and make lives that much better.Claims · 34 wordsOne example that was demonstrated to me was taking a cell out, injecting it with something that combats cancer directly and reinserting the cell to fight the cancer directly, as opposed to having chemotherapy.Reasoning · 7 wordsThe point is, research gives us results.Claims · 10 wordsCanada made a commitment of $5 billion over three years.1Reasoning · 34 wordsThis is the type of thing we can use to build the capital infrastructure to ensure we get more research on things like cancer and the cure for cancer, Vague promisewhich are vital to Canadians.