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Helena Konanz

120 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 83 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 20%Claims 37%Reasoning 9%Procedure 6%The ask 28%

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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 16 wordsBritish Columbia has everything we need for a strong, prosperous forestry sector for decades to come.Positioning Claims · 44 wordsThere are 200,000 Canadian loggers, mill workers and forest product-makers who feed their families thanks to our forestry sector, including thousands in southern British Columbia.1 However, a decade of Liberal mismanagement has seen B.C. lose more than half of its pulp and paper mills.2 Positioning · 8 wordsOttawa has become numb to our mill closures.Positioning Reasoning · 11 wordsWhen a mill dies, it puts a whole town at risk. Procedure · 7 wordsMy message to the Liberals is simple: ProcedureThe ask · 34 wordsfocus on what Canada can control, prioritize lumber in all trade talks, invest in biofuel to keep pulp mills alive, Vague promiseand treat this sector as the critical part of our economy that it is.

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