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Sandra Cobena

168 words · 12 sentences · 13 clauses

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Positioning 36%Claims 27%Anecdote 33%Greeting 4%

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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 17 wordsI rise today with a heavy heart to honour the life of my dear friend Patrick Beatty.Positioning Claims · 21 wordsPatrick unexpectedly passed in a car accident on September 23.1 His wife, Nabiha, was also seriously injured and is now recovering.2 Anecdote · 24 wordsMy husband and I had the privilege of knowing Patrick and attending university with him. We shared many moments, the kind filled with laughter.Anecdote Positioning · 12 wordsPatrick knew exactly how to make sure everyone had a good time.Positioning Claims · 25 wordsPatrick was a long-time Conservative activist inspired by his father’s dedication to public service.3 He loved Canada and was a strong advocate for organ donation. Anecdote · 32 wordsHaving already endured the unimaginable loss of their first son nearly 20 years ago, my heart breaks knowing that his parents must now endure that pain again with the loss of Patrick.Anecdote Positioning · 31 wordsTo Nabiha and the entire Beatty family, our political family mourns with them. We pray for Nabiha’s full recovery, and may the memories that Patrick gave us remain with us forever.Positioning Greeting · 6 wordsRest in peace, my dear friend.Greeting

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