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Joël Lightbound

121 words · 10 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Eric Lefebvre (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, with all due respect to the minister, I can say that I have been here for my constituents for nearly 10 years. The Restaurant populaire de Victoriaville has served 5,625 breakfasts this year, which is a 15% increase in one year. It has served 21,428 lunches, which is a 10% increase in one year. The lunch boxes for children project has provided 31,453 lunches for our children, 8,167 snacks and involved 40 volunteers. I would like to thank the gang at Clan-Destins for their significant contribution to this cause. Will the government adopt the Conservative measures?”
Statement grade
D–
41 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 12%Positioning 12%Claims 60%Reasoning 10%Procedure 7%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Thanks · 14 wordsI would also like to pay tribute to the organizations in my colleague’s constituency.Thanks Positioning · 14 wordsThey are undoubtedly doing remarkable work, Unearned certaintyas we have seen happening across the country.PositioningPartly on point Claims · 29 wordsSimilar organizations in my constituency were the first to welcome the Canada child benefit and to see the impact it has on the lives of households in my constituency. Reasoning · 12 wordsI am sure this is also the case in my colleague’s constituency.Off point Procedure · 8 wordsIn fact, let us talk about his constituency.Procedure Claims · 44 wordsThere are 20,587 children who receive an average of $4,176 thanks to the Canada child benefit.1 My colleague voted against this measure.2Off point He talks about reducing the tax on diesel.Partly on point He voted against $4,176 for 20,587 children in his constituency. He voted against 34,563—Off point

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