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Joël Lightbound

68 words · 3 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Patrick Bonin (Bloc Québécois)
“Madam Speaker, Bill C-39 will also be damaging to labour rights. The Liberals are effectively placing the right to strike under their control with their interpretation of section 107 of the Canada Labour Code. The Canadian Union of Public Employees has already announced that it will challenge this in court, and it will win because there is a precedent. The Tribunal administratif du travail du Québec overturned a nearly identical measure two weeks ago. Instead of getting schooled in court, will the liberals collaborate with the workers?”
Statement grade
C
60 / 100, held down by Clarity
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 13%Claims 10%Reasoning 18%Positioning 7%Promise 51%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Procedure · 9 wordsthere is a lot of talk about this bill, ProcedureClaims · 7 wordsbut the right to strike is protected.1 Reasoning · 12 wordsThe goal is to add guardrails around section 107 and its use.2 Positioning · 5 wordsWe want to ensure balance, PositioningVague promisePromise · 35 wordsand we want negotiations to start early to avoid strikes as much as possible so that we have greater predictability and certainty as we build this country, build major projects and build a strong economy.Vague promise

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