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Corey Hogan

90 words · 4 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to David McKenzie (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, Alberta’s oil and gas industry is a critical component of our national economy. Despite all the press releases and announcements, the Liberal government still maintains the west coast tanker ban, Bill C-48. We know the tanker ban is not about protecting the environment, because it does not prevent the sailing of tankers through the waters supposedly protected by the ban. Will the Prime Minister support Bill C-264, which is my private member’s bill to repeal the west coast tanker ban, and get out of the way so our oil and gas—”
Statement grade
B+
Average 81 / 100
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Procedure 10%Claims 78%Positioning 12%

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Madam Speaker, Procedure · 3 wordsthe tanker ban, ProcedureClaims · 26 wordswhile enshrined in law under the Trudeau government, of course has existed on a voluntary basis since the 1980s under Mulroney, Campbell, Chrétien, Martin and Harper, 1Partly on pointPositioning · 11 wordsand continues to be a cornerstone of protecting the north coast.Positioning Claims · 33 wordsWe are seeing record production in oil and gas.2 We have a west coast pipeline because we have come to a place of agreement through memorandums of understanding with British Columbia and Alberta.4Partly on point Procedure · 6 wordsIn the member’s region of Calgary, ProcedureClaims · 11 wordswhich is also my region, jobs are up 62,000 this year.3Partly on point

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