“Madam Speaker, my constituents want action and not more words. Strathcona Resources, a Canadian success story, is proposing the export of 250,000 barrels a day of crude oil from Prince Rupert and can do so within two years with oil shipped by rail. The Prime Minister says Canada has to diversify and grow its export markets. Here is a golden opportunity. Will the Prime Minister stick to his word and repeal the west coast tanker ban so Canadian success stories like Strathcona can thrive?”
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The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 76. The grade is held to 75, 30 above Relevance.
75 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 67%Positioning 33%
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Madam Speaker, Claims · 43 wordswith great respect to my colleague, 62,000 jobs this year sounds like an awful lot of action to me.1That is also combined with record oil production and record diesel production.2We are also seeing rents and housing prices go down in Calgary.3Positioning · 11 wordsWe have done that by finding a balance and working together.PositioningClaims · 14 wordsThat is also supporting renewable energy in Calgary, a centre of all energy production.4Positioning · 17 wordsI am happy to stand by the record and inform the colleague and his constituents about it.PositioningPartly on point