Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Greg McLean

172 words · 6 sentences · 11 clauses

Statement grade
D+
51 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 14%Claims 49%Positioning 6%The question 31%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 5 wordsI appreciated my colleague’s speech.Thanks Claims · 12 wordsAs noted, she is somebody who has a background in chemical engineering. Thanks · 19 wordsI have always appreciated that about her, as well as her ability to get facts, figures and everything else.Thanks Claims · 36 wordsShe talked in her speech about the increases in oil, gas and mining that are going to happen here, and of all the sensors that are going to have to be part and parcel of that. Positioning · 4 wordsAll of those sensors, PositioningPartly on pointClaims · 36 wordsand she would know this, have an embedded carbon price, as does the increased production of oil and gas, in particular, to make sure we have a baseload in a reliable energy system in this country. Positioning · 6 wordsSince she has crossed the floor, PositioningThe question · 54 wordsand I am going to ask the member this question very clearly, has she managed to convince the rest of her new colleagues over there that this whole green shift economy is a bit of a myth and that we need to build a sustainable economy in Canada that depends on oil and gas?Off point

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