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Kelly McCauley

47 words · 3 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to James Bezan (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, I am pleased to get up again. The member for Edmonton West was talking about the ongoing creative accounting. The Coast Guard is a case in point. It is a civilian organization that does a great job at navigation research, icebreaking and policing our fishery, but it does not have any constabulary power at all. It told the defence committee that although 100% of its funding is now calculated under National Defence, it is only a civilian organization, and that if it runs into any threats of a hot conflict developing between Canada and an adversary, it would flee the situation. I would like my colleague to talk about the other creative accounting we are seeing from the Liberals, as with Transport Canada aircraft, that has been moved to National Defence, rather than them buying the kit we need to keep Canada safe.”
Statement grade
C
Average 64 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 15%The ask 21%Promise 43%Positioning 21%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Thanks · 7 wordsmy colleague from Manitoba said it all.Thanks The ask · 10 wordsWhat we want from the government is accountability and transparency. Promise · 20 wordsWe will work with the government to serve our men and women in uniform and get them the right equipment, Vague promisePositioning · 10 wordsbut the government has to do its part as well.PositioningPartly on point

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