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Philip Earle

111 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Fraser Tolmie (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, I consider my colleague from Labrador a friend. I would just like to ask him a few things about his intervention. Under the Chrétien government, the Liberals came out with a defence white paper. It was about buying off-the-shelf technology, and that was, basically, relying on foreign countries for equipment. I heard my colleague say that put us in a bad situation, and we are reliant on foreign nations. Under a Conservative government, we invested on the ground floor of the F-35s, which included small businesses in Canada being able to gain from the contracts. Now the Liberals are dragging the puck on that. What side of the fence is my colleague on? If I get two Liberals in the same room, they are arguing between each other, and at some point one of them is going to win. Which one is going to win?”
Statement grade
B+
84 / 100, held down by Signal
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Thanks 25%Reasoning 25%Claims 34%Positioning 15%

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Madam Speaker, Thanks · 28 wordsI share the same respect for my colleague across the way. We have worked collaboratively on many things since I came here as a new member of Parliament.Thanks Reasoning · 28 wordsI would say to my hon. colleague that the world has changed. The premise of his question, while well stated, does not recognize that the world has changed. Claims · 38 wordsThis legislation would allow us to invest more into our military but build an industry right here in Canada so those investments that are made would go to create jobs, maybe in his riding or in another riding.1 Positioning · 17 wordsIt is all about the women and men in uniform and giving them the tools they need.Positioning

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