“Madam Speaker, the member just said that military recruitment is down. Again the member is wrong, and he should know that we had record numbers of people applying to join the Canadian Forces. The member should acknowledge that. At the end of the day, we have a Prime Minister who has been pushing for the last 18 months for our Canadian Forces. We have gone from a Stephen Harper 1% of GDP for the military to a 2% of Canadian GDP under the current Prime Minister. The member needs to be more straightforward and stick with the facts.”
Statement grade
C+
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 84. The grade is held to 67, 30 above Signal.
67 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 4%Claims 40%Anecdote 31%Positioning 25%
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Madam Speaker, Procedure · 4 wordsI will be straightforward: ProcedureClaims · 39 wordsThere are more people washing out in the military.1They are being thrown into recruitment centres and being told that they are going to become soldiers, sailors and infantry, and they do not even know.They just show up.Anecdote · 30 wordsI have talked to friends who are in the military, and they are asking, “What are these people doing here?”They do not even know what they are doing here.AnecdotePositioning · 24 wordsDo not tell me that recruitment is up when the full spectrum of what is going on in the military is not being given.Positioning