Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Bienvenu-Olivier Ntumba

169 words · 13 sentences · 16 clauses

Statement grade
B+
81 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 52%Positioning 39%Thanks 4%Reasoning 5%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 27 wordsthis summer, Alstom was awarded a landmark contract to design, engineer, manufacture and provide support for 313 new rail cars that will serve passengers across the country.2 Positioning · 6 wordsThat is good news for Mont‑Saint‑Bruno—L’Acadie, PositioningClaims · 47 wordswhere Alstom’s North American headquarters are located.1 That is where the teams will do the design and engineering work for VIA Rail’s future trains.3 At the peak of construction, this project will create or support 185 jobs in Saint-Bruno and, in total, more than 1,000 direct, indirect, 45Positioning · 33 wordsor related jobs across the country. Our region plays a key role in Canada’s economy. Our teams are talented. They are full of ideas and know how to build the trains of tomorrow.Positioning Thanks · 6 wordsThis contract showcases our region’s expertise.Thanks Reasoning · 9 wordsI would like to congratulate Alstom on this success. Positioning · 9 wordsBuying local means supporting our jobs and our know-how.Positioning Claims · 6 wordsOur government is leading by example.Vague promise Positioning · 18 wordsQuebec is playing a key role in this effort. Together with Quebec, we are building a stronger Canada, PositioningClaims · 8 wordswhere we are masters in our own home.

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