Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Garnett Genuis

200 words · 9 sentences · 11 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 77 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Anecdote 16%Reasoning 30%Claims 16%Positioning 16%Promise 21%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 33 wordsthe last few times my wife and I have announced that we were expecting, we got a lot of congratulations, but there were always a few people who said it must be nice.Anecdote Reasoning · 19 wordsThey are happy for us but sad about the fact that their own family goals have not been realized. Claims · 33 wordsThese comments reflect how Canada is becoming a more and more challenging place to start and grow a family. My wife and I started our careers and bought our first home before 2015.1 Positioning · 5 wordsIt was a different time.Positioning Reasoning · 42 wordsToday, homes and jobs are out of reach for too many young people. A rigid parental leave system makes it more difficult to integrate work and family life, and this contributes to the fact that fewer Canadians are reaching their family goals. Positioning · 26 wordsWhile I would like to encourage young couples to just go for it, I understand that many see their family formation aspirations blocked at every turn.Positioning Promise · 42 wordsAs my wife and I prepare to welcome our seventh child, we are committed to continuing this fight for the next generation of families so that life is affordable, leave is flexible and the sublime joy of parenthood is available to all.Vague promise

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