Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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Claims 78%Reasoning 7%Thanks 16%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 107 wordslast week, we celebrated the first-ever Swiss Day on the Hill.1Parliamentarians, business leaders and diplomats gathered for the inaugural Swiss Day on the Hill, capped by an evening reception complete with a chocolate Matterhorn, handcrafted by our friends at Le Cordon Bleu here in Ottawa.2Canada and Switzerland are both federations built on linguistic diversity.3In fact, Switzerland has four national languages: 4French, German, Italian and Romansh.5In both of our countries, diversity is our strength. [Member spoke in German, Italian and Romansh] Our nations are close partners in trade, innovation and research, 6and Swiss Canadians have enriched our communities from coast to coast to coast.Reasoning · 9 wordsThe conversations we start today can become tomorrow’s partnerships.Thanks · 22 wordsI thank the many organizers and supporters for bringing this celebration to the Hill.Long live the friendship between Switzerland and Canada.Thanks