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Peter Fragiskatos

169 words · 11 sentences · 16 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 21 wordsI rise to honour the incredible life of Gord Hume, a Londoner who passed away recently at the age of 76.1Thanks Claims · 84 wordsGord was born in Saskatoon.2 He came to London in 1980.3 He first worked in news media, 4but made his most lasting contributions to our community as a city councillor. He was elected in 1997, was on the council until 2010, 56and especially contributed, through the millennium committee formed in 1998, to the revitalization of the Covent Garden Market, to the revitalization of the Central Library and to what was then called the John Labatt Centre, 78910but is now called the Canada Life Place.11 Positioning · 8 wordsThis is the home of the London Knights, 12PositioningClaims · 21 wordswhich is a landmark in London, to say the least.Unearned certainty Gord also worked as a novelist, producing a number of books, 13Positioning · 11 wordsand wrote widely on municipal government.14 This was a true Londoner.PositioningUnearned certainty Reasoning · 13 wordsThis was a great Canadian.Unearned certainty Our city is less because of his passing. Claims · 11 wordsOur city was great because of Gord and people like him.

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