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Wayne Long

97 words · 9 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Adam Chambers (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I happen to think the members of Parliament from multiple parties who have spent decades in this place have made valuable contributions to this country. The fastest-growing expense in this budget is interest on the debt. In fact, in just a few years, almost 14¢ of every dollar earned by the government will go to paying interest on the debt. When the Prime Minister came in, that number was just over 10¢. On behalf of all of the young people who will be saddled with the credit card-like spending and debts and deficits of the Liberal government, I ask, why do the Liberals keep breaking their fiscal promises?”
Statement grade
D
47 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 18%Anecdote 20%Positioning 48%Promise 14%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 17 wordsI will say that in 8,100 days, the Leader of the Opposition did build six affordable houses.1 Anecdote · 19 wordsMy riding’s hockey team, the Saint John Sea Dogs, has gone to almost as many Memorial Cups as that.2AnecdoteOff point Positioning · 14 wordsOn this side of the House, we have a plan to build our economy.PositioningVague promise Promise · 14 wordsWe have a plan to direct investment in major projects and to increase jobs.Partly on pointVague promise Positioning · 33 wordsWe have a Prime Minister with world-class economic and business credentials. The Conservative leader has never worked one day outside this House.3 Canadians see it.Unearned certainty Canadians know it.Unearned certainty They stand with our side.PositioningOff point

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