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Leslie Church

99 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Scot Davidson (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Liberals can pretend that their expensive programs are working, but the record numbers of Canadians lined up at food banks can tell us that they are not. Food bank usage in Canada has a record 2.35 million visits in a month, and nearly one in five clients is employed. These are working Canadians who used to make ends meet and now cannot because of the government’s failed policy. If the Prime Minister thinks life is so affordable, why is a full-time job not enough to feed a family?”
Statement grade
F
34 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Claims 100%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 99 wordswe know that Canadians are facing challenges right now.Off pointUnearned certainty Food is the beginning, but this also extends to the work we are doing to bring down the cost of renting or buying a home, one of the highest expenses that we know Canadians face.Vague promise We have renewed our child care deals to keep building a program that is saving families thousands of dollars a year.12Partly on pointVague promise We are making massive investments in students, in training and in the skilled trades.Vague promise We are investing in the things that are going to build prosperity and build a bright future for all Canadians.Off pointVague promise

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