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Mélanie Joly

80 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Ned Kuruc (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, it has been a month since Stelco announced that 350 Hamilton steelworkers would lose their jobs. Here is the Conservative five-point plan to protect the steel industry and its workers: get a steel deal with the U.S., which the Prime Minister promised a year and a half ago; end illegal foreign steel dumping; get rid of the industrial carbon tax; pre-approve multiple LNG projects; and sue Cleveland-Cliffs for breaking its contract to the Prime Minister. Which of these have you completed?”
Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 14%Claims 58%Promise 16%The ask 12%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 11 wordsmy colleague just referred to how we can support our steelworkers.Procedure Claims · 16 wordsOur steelworkers are victims of the American tariffs, 1and we have been there to support them. Promise · 13 wordsThat is why we will make sure we protect the jobs in Hamilton.Vague promise The ask · 10 wordsStelco needs to get back to us in 11 days.2 Claims · 30 wordsThe CEO cannot say that he will advocate for American tariffs at a time when he committed to making sure that our steel would go south of the border tariff-free.3Partly on point

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